Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

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Descriptive details provide sensory recreations of some experiences, objects or imaginings, so, description allows the audience to experience a more concrete sensation and transport the reader to  a specific scene.

Sensory words describe how the speaker experiences the world using the senses such as smell, see, or taste. Some examples are cackle, cheer, colorless, delicious, among many others.

konichiwa~! my name is zalgo and i am here to you out on this amazing day. i have been through break-ups before, and they are not easy. each one seems to get a bit harder yet easier. the best thing to do is do the things you enjoy doing the most before you had got in t he relationship. maybe even try and find new and more exciting things to do that will take your mind off of it. and it is no surprise you seem to have a fear to talk to anyone, most people do, it's called "anxiety". most people overcome and conquer their anxiety. just try talking to someone on a video game or go out to a coffee shop and try starting a conversation with a person. that will definitely !

i hope this ! : 3

"stay and stay proud! " - zalgo

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