Love so sour
love so sweet
a love so deep that it can't be beat
a touch so sensual
a touch so soft
there be despair if it were lost
a lustful whisper
a breath of life
a shadow of darkness
fell over my night
and the sky opens up to reveal
radiant shows of images so real
they day we met our fist kiss
the night we sleep then all was dismissed
what do u think? should I rewrite it? how can I make it better? also please rate my poem 1-10
there is just a typo in the second last line and... only if you could extend it a bit more?
In simple words, It's really great sis!!
I would rate it 9.5/10
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well say a good goal is to do 150 sit ups in a week! or 90 pull ups a day. even 60 push ups in a month these are all fair goals!
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