Read this excerpt from the body paragraphs of an informative essay. the secret service guards government leaders and protects money. the agency also investigates financial crimes. how could this excerpt be improved as the writer revises the essay? the writer could focus on a different federal agency instead. the writer could include more details and factual support. the writer could add a statement that sets up the topic. the writer could add a summary to restate the topic.

The correct answer is “The writer could include more details and factual support.”

Indeed, the body paragraphs of an essay develop each one of the ideas or theses announced on the introduction. For this they need to include details that further explain each one of the ideas announced in the introduction and factual support that confirms such ideas.

the writer could add more details and factual support

Explanation:

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if you could provide the poem below, i'd be happy to you!

explanation:

you didn't give us the poem, or the title of the poem. but it is essential for you to give us that, otherwise we can not detect when the poem has a tonal shift!