Read the sentence. walt whitman was an american poet, journalist, and he also wrote essays. which revision most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

If we consider that Parallelism is the use of components in a sentence that are  grammatically the same ( or similar in their construction), we can correct the given sentence as it follows:

Walt Whitman was an American poet and journalist ( being POET and JOURNALIST two professions and two nouns. He also wrote essays ( as WRITE is a verb, and it doesn't have the same grammatical structure as  POET and JOURNALIST)

social contract theory basically says that all individuals are born equal, and provided a god given right to consent to be governed. american government is based of this

thomas hobbes and john locke said that we are selfish, individualistic, and constantly at war with each other, therefore we need to be controlled. 

government is defined as the legitimate use of force to control human behavior within territorial boundaries, here comes in hobbes and locke.

hobbes takes the part about controlling human behavior. while locke takes the part of legitimate use of force, since force is not legitimate unless there is consent of the people. 

there are basically 3 goals of the government: 1) maintain order by protecting life and property. 2) providing public goods, those which are typically not provided by the public sector, such as roads and education. 3) promote equality be it political, opportunist or outcome equality. 

back in the area of iowa even though you were found in florida there is a system that they dont want to tell you about where they can go fish for you in other states and bring you back to be tried in front of the crime scene so your location

plz mark brainliest i would appreciate it btw i live in michigan too xd