Read the paragraph.
[1] thomas paine, a pivotal figure in the american revolution, was born in britain in 1737. [2] when he was in his
mid-thirties, he met benjamin franklin in london. [3] franklin paine move to philadelphia, where he pursued a
career in journalism, he became the editor of pennsylvania magazine. [4] in 1776, paine authored a pro-independence
pamphlet called common sense, which was widely read throughout the colonies.
which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraph's sentence fluency?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4

The correct answer is sentence number 3.

The sentence that should be revised to improve this paragraph's sentence fluency is "Franklin helped Paine move to Philadelphia, where he pursued a career in journalism, he became the editor of Pennsylvania Magazine."

When writing a story, it is very important to consider the fluency of the sentences for better reading and understanding. Otherwise, the readers could get confused or the sentences could sound strange. That is what happens with sentence number 3 and it should be revised and corrected. Never forget to also check grammar and spelling, and always use the proper sources of information.

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