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have you learned about ancient rome and ancient greece? these are two amazing civilizations. these civilizations have a lot of similarities but are also very different in their ways. in this essay, i will be talking about these two great civilizations how they are alike and how they are different.
ancient rome had a republic government. unlike ancient rome ancient greece's government varied over different times. ancient greece went from a democracy to monarchy to an oligarchy and finally to a tyranny. ancient grece's civilization developed by trade where ancient rome grew by conquest.
ancient rome and ancient greece are both located on a peninsula. ancient rome being on an italian peninsula and ancient greece being on a peloponnesian peninsula. with both empires being surrounded by mountains and hills it made it harder for enemies to attack their regions. the economy of ancient rome and ancient greece was based on agriculture.

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Ancient greece was the birth place of western civilization about 2500 years ago.greek civilization developed chiefly in small city states called poli. the best known city stated were athens and sparta.the greeks called them selves hellens and their land hellas.ancient greeks made great achievments in philosophy,architecture,pottery and sculpture.they also developed drama and originated westrn philosophy.there are some greek origins like democracy,phsychology,olympic and marathon.

And in rome different peoples inhabited ancient italy one of these peoples were called latins.they settled on the hills above the river tiber in central italy around 753BC.

the languages of ancient romans,latin bacame the basis of the french,italian,spanish and other languages.ancient romans built public baths and amphitheatres.the most famous amphitheatre in the city of rome was coliseum.the roman republic was established in 500BC.two elected officials called consuls headed the government of the republic.a consul served for only a year.the senate was the most powerful government body of the roman republic and senators served for life.the roman empire was established after the republic destroyed by 20 years civil war.

1) the taiping rebellion was prompted from 1850-1864 and waged against the ruling of machu qing dynasty. the rebellion was caused by hong xiuquan and class differences, later leading to a radical change in social and economic structure.

3) karl marx, a believer of the principle of socialism, believed that the working class would have to free themselves from the exploitation of industrialists by establishing a radical socialist classless society where all industries and   property are owned by the state.

5) as indians revolt gained power, people found additional reasons to protest against the british rule. princely families joined the uprising due to changes to the inheritance law which made adopted children ineligible to assume the throne. this was an attempt by the british to control royal succession in the princely states that were nominally independent from the british.

answer: in october 1962, an american u-2 spy plane secretly photographed nuclear missile sites being built by the soviet union on the island of cuba. president kennedy did not want the soviet union and cuba to know that he had discovered the missiles. he met in secret with his advisors for several days to discuss the problem.

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