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1.) Add a comma in between weather and because, make the "b" lower case.

2.) Take away the period and make the "I" in if lower case.

3.) Put a comma after "day" and take away the period between "sale" and "and"

4.) Put a comma after street (make sure when adding commas to change the word after it to a lower case.)

5.) No need for changes.

6.) Put a comma between "cry' and "Maria".

7.) No need for changes.

8.) Make the period a comma between the "response" and "A"

9.) No need for changes.

10.) Change the period into a comma between "toys" and "turning"