Section 1: Revising An Existing Narrative Complete items 1-4 as you work through the pages in this activity. You will be
revising and editing this paragraph:
George Washington was Americas first and greatest president.
America was started in 1776 with the Declaration of
Independence. He was born in 1732. He stopped the Whiskey
Rebellion from becoming a war in Pennsylvania. He kept us out
of war in France. His experience as an army officer helped him
avoid two wars during his presidency. Washington's greatest
example was retiring after only two terms.
1. This paragraph has a sentence that does not belong. To find it, read the topic
sentence again. Which sentence is not about George Washington? Draw a line
through that sentence (2 points)

president carter called the victims of kidnapping "victims of terrorism and anarchy" and added that the united states was not going to give in to blackmail. in the united states, they see hostage-taking as an outrage on the part of the islamist movement that violated the principle of international law on the immunity and inviolability of diplomats and their embassies.

carter refused to yield to the demands, khomeini used the situation to consolidate his power and nullify the challenges of the moderate wing of his government, headed by its president. the euphoria over the humiliation of the most powerful nation distracted the iranian people from the economic difficulties of their country. carter, in april 1980, broke diplomatic relations with iran and imposed a trade embargo, except medicine and food. iranian funds in the us they were frozen and accounted for to compensate the hostages when they were released and to pay the demands of us companies against iran.

when she faked her death and the readers knew but romeo didn't.