Someone in your peer review group says that a story needs more details about the setting. How could you build on her comment in a way that helps the writer make the story better? Suggest a different order for the story's events.
Ask the writer questions about where and when the story happened.
Disagree with the comment and tell the writer that the story is perfect.
Make a list of details that you would add if it were your story

the paragraph about Jacksonian democracy.

During Jackson’s presidency nearly all the states expanded suffrage to all  

white men

in the United States. Jackson supported this trend toward  

involving common people in the democratic process

.

Explanation:

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During Jackson’s presidency nearly all the states expanded suffrage to all  

white men

in the United States. Jackson supported this trend toward  

involving common people in the democratic process

.

onian democracy.

During Jackson’s presidency nearly all the states expanded suffrage to all  

white men

in the United States. Jackson supported this trend toward  

involving common people in the democratic process

.

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cultural achievements of the 1920's 2010  

1. cultural achievements and african american achievements in the 1920’s  

2. art and literature charles lindberg flew from ny to paris, france. became national hero; first transatlantic flight.  

3. greenwich village (new york) and the south side (chicago)  many artists, writers, and intellectuals flocked to these areas to share ideas  people lead bohemian, or artistic and unconventional, lifestyles