eeeaaase help give brainlist Li-Young is writing a suspense story for a local summer camp’s evening fireside program. This is his first paragraph. The old house next door had been empty for years. Ginny couldn’t remember a time when anyone had lived there. Then, one night, she heard noises coming from the house. When she glanced out her window, she thought she saw something move in one of the upstairs rooms. She decided to investigate and went to wake up her brother.

How should Li-Young revise this paragraph to elaborate on specific ideas in the text?

A.

He should explain what Ginny knows about the house next door.

B.

He should give more exact facts and details about the house’s location.

C.

He should use more precise words and details to describe what Ginny saw and heard.

D.

He should provide readers with more background information about Ginny, her brother, and their family.

answer; ///i believe that the correct answer is (a); ///the crystal will

a. poison gas was sprayed over battlefields by airplanes to weaken enemy positions before major attacks.

2 another reason colonist hello

3 reasons colonist gave for not supporting the revolution are

1 they were scared of the british

some colonist were scard of british because they know what the other colinest were doing was treason and could result in execution so they decided not to participate in it

2 some colonist were loyal to britian   which were called the loyalist

many families were serpeated   because of this son and father 1 wetn to fight in the war the other fought aganiust them which created alot of dispute between the family and   they were revolted that there families were fighting aganist them

3   aswell some colinist also   were promised freedom and protected for them to fight on the side of the british so they fought for the british in return for there freedom and protection

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