Read the body paragraph from an argumentative essay on Louisiana's economy . 1) To better understand the current state of the economy it is helpful to look at one business as a case study. 2) Five years ago, Paul's Pizza was a struggling restaurant 3) It was suffering in a ways. 4 ) Today, the business has dozens of workers . 5) It has become so profitable the owner recently opened a second location What would be the best way to revise sentence 3?

Change it to a more respectful tone.

Fix the spelling and punctuation errors.

Add vivid imagery or descriptive details.

Maintain the focus in the topic sentence.

Explanation:

3. republican abraham lincoln

4. south carolina

5. charleston, south carolina

6. confederates

7. minie bullet - made defense even safer, it spun faster, traveled further and was five times more accurate than any single-man weapon. able to kill at half a mile, it was the largest contributor to battle wounds

      or the the gatling gun - the most successful of several rapid-fire guns that were born before the war. its efficiency in killing only made war more deadly.

idk which one u learned about. pick one.

8. the south was fighting to maintain its way of life, whereas the north was fighting to maintain a union. so they had will, and the north were fighing on unfamiliar territory

9. union had the large population, people to fight in the war and work in the factories to make war materials, industrial base, the factories to make these war materials. the union also was wealthier than the confederacy and could finance the war.

10. stonewall jackson

11. chancellorsville

12. gettysburg

13. sherman

some of these might be wrong but i tried my best.   : )

b) race riots in several cities