How can you rewrite this statement to be longer and more academically written?

I don't see a statement, But I do know this:

1. Don't use passive's, use active voices

2. Pix it up in Terms of Punctuation

3. Vary you're sentence structures

4. Avoid Choppiness

5. Avoid repetition

6. Be conscious

7. Use vocabulary that you know

8. But also work on expanding your Vocabulary

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