Read this sentence from an informative essay.

the neolithic revolution led to increased food supplies.

this sentence could be improved by including

relevant facts.

effective transitions.

a clear thesis.

a clear style.

The sentence "The Neolithic Revolution led to increased food supplies" can be improved by including relevant facts. Option A is correct.

Relevant facts are important in an attempt to write an informative essay, in order to support and provide evidence that proves the information presented.

When writing the informative essay, it would be appropriate to make a list with the important facts and then, create an outline that will organize your facts in a logical way to write the essay based on the outline you've created.

before, mexicans where an indian tribe but when the spanish took over, they changed their language to spanish.

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could you use this to with a topic?

the key difference between a democracy and a republic lies in the limits placed on government by the law, which has implications for minority rights. both forms of government tend to use a representational system — i.e., citizens vote to elect politicians to represent their interests and form the government.