Which student’s story is more interesting? i saw a snake. At first i thought it was an everyday garter snake. But after i looked at it for a little while, i changed my mind and decided that it was probably a poisonous snake because it had a rattle on its tail. That happened one morning when i was walking. I was hiking on a crisp, clear autumn morning when a snake came slithering toward me. "it’s probably just a garter snake," i thought. As the snake slithered nearer, i spotted a rattle at the tip of its tail. I jumped back with a gasp. The snake was poisonous!.