To improve the relationship between ideas, the writer should revise sentence 2 by explaining the concept of a tax burden. Adding "however" to the beginning of the sentence. Placing "therefore" at the beginning of the sentence. Connecting it to the preceding sentence with "and. ".

To make your papers high quality, you - make sure you establish a clear purpose- use a variety of sentence structures and advanced vocabulary - organize the essay effectively to provide a coherent flow of thought/argument- stay on topic! make sure each sentence supports your thesis/argument/purpose - avoid incorrect grammar and mechanics that could detract from your credibility.- use liking words and sentences so your essay flows. as for the new strategies you have learned from the lesson, i think you can draw from he bullet points listed above. hope this !

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