Write a paragraph about ur hometown

My hometown:

I come from a small town called Sur, Oman. First of all, it’s is very green and has many beaches and mountains.  My hometown has a very small population and the people are very friendly. It also has a small city center or down town area and you can find many shops and restaurants. For example, sea food restaurants supermarkets. Further more,  My hometown is a coastal town as a results, there are many boats and ships called dhows made by a small traditional  wooden ship factory. In addition, there are many fishermen around so you can eat many kinds of  cheap fish. Its very hot in the summer and warm in the winter. There are many parks and museums in my hometown. Many tourists visit my hometown in the winter time because of the pleasant weather and the can see the turtles and their little ones.

I live in Sur, Oman now

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