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most honorable delegates,
i recommend that you tell the state leaders that these three weaknesses in the articles of confederation must be addressed. they require a new plan for government. the three greatest weaknesses in the articles of confederation are the following:
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tell them the first one is a problem because the second one is a great problem because the third one is also a struggle
preamble to the u. s. constitution
"we the people of the united states, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity, do ordain and establish this constitution for the united states of america."
this is how i would rewrite this preamble so that other people can understand it.

sincerely, your name

Explanation:

I recommend that state leaders replace the Articles of Confederation. We need a new Constitution. I have listed three weaknesses of the Articles of Confederation below. I include an explanation of why each weakness is a problem.  

Weakness #1: Congress could not create taxes

Explanation: Taxes help pay for the government’s functions. The Congress could only request money from the state legislature, but if the state legislature did not send any, Congress would not have money to run the government. This should not be permitted, as the government could collapse if the states fail to pay the money.  

Weakness #2: Each state printed its own currency

Explanation: To do business across state borders, this would require a person to obtain money from several different states. In addition, the value of this money was different across the states. In Massachusetts, it would be very complicated to do business with Georgia, while people in Virginia could do business with their fellow Virginians easily. Every state should have the same currency.  

Weakness #3: New laws would require the support of nine of the 13 states, more than a majority.

Explanation: Requiring nine of the 13 states to pass new laws made it almost impossible to get this kind of majority to pass new legislation. It is likely that 8 states would vote for the law and 5 would not, or 7 states would, and 6 would not.  

Part 3

Preamble to the U.S. Constitution

"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."

This is how I would rewrite the Preamble so that other people can understand it. I hope it helps increase support for the new Constitution.

My Preamble:

We, the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect government, establish fairness, ensure peace in the United States, provide protection, promote the wellbeing of everyone, and secure freedom to ourselves and our children, do establish this Constitution for the United States of America.

Sincerely,  

Your Name  

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