How do you say, “ When is your sibling’s birthday?, in Japanese/Romanji

Is this inappropriate language,”good evening,everyone. for coming out to sit on hard,uncomfortable stadium concrete on an unseasonably warm evening and wearing clothes and shoes you can’t wait to get home to get get ou of.” if so,how can i write it in formal?

After swimming for hours he was tired what is the personal pronoun in the sentence below

A30 year old man comes to the emergency room complaining of severe abdominal pain most of his body is covered with tattoos and he has several body piercings he informs the staff that he does not have health insurance