American sign language

hi, i'f someone could let me know i'f my english and asl transcript is correct i would greatly appreciate it? i need to make a short dialogue between two people at least five sentences and then write it in asl gloss beneath.

(mom) elizabeth (shift left): hey kendra how was school?
asl: hello k-e-n-d-r-a how school?

(daughter) kendra (shift right): hi, mom it was good.
asl: hello, mom good.

elizabeth (shift left): do you feel like lunch?
asl: lunch you want?

kendra (shift right): sure, sounds good.
asl: sure, good.

elizabeth (shift left): do you want salad or sandwiches?
asl: (shift right) salad (shift left) sandwiches (center) you want which? (wh-question/eyebrows down)

kendra (shifts right): salad, sounds good.
asl: salad, good.

you so much for your time and any answers given!