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Toby wrote this paragraph for his persuasive essay: Anyone can grow a garden. You can grow fresh vegetables. You can harvest all summer. The vegetables taste good. Growing a garden is good exercise. You pull weeds. You trim plants. Everyone should grow a vegetable garden.

What change should Toby make to improve his paper?

use less slang language
add a transition after the first sentence
vary the sentence structure
think of a word to replace “vegetable”

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