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to conclude, the himalayan mountains should not be commercially climbed. this is due to the explosive death rates, useless exploitation of sherpas, and the accumulating garbage on the once-feared giants of the east. the himalayas should be respected and the people in the area . constantly conquering the mountains does not complete either of those things.

In conclusion, people should not be climbing the Himalayan mountains because of the extremely high death rates, impractical use of sherpas, and the numerous rumors about the once-feared giants of the east. The Himalayan mountains deserve to be respected and the people in the are should be helped. With people continuing to climb the mountain, neither of these things are being accomplished.

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