2. revise the following paragraph from a student essay. focus on making the main claim ciester,
strengthening the evidence, and addressing problems with plagiarism. you may choose to use portions
of the paragraph as they are written underline any phases or sentences that you copy from the original
paragraph. then use bold font to highlight any sentences you atted to the paragraph (15 points)

Do you think that the american culture has defined what “normal” is and so our perception of chris mccandless is skewed based on that?

You seal resign myself to you also i guess what you mean, i behold from the beach your crooked inviting fingers, i believe you refuse to go back without feeling of me, we must have a turn together, i undress, hurry me out of sight of the land, cushion me soft, rock me in billowy drowse, dash me with amorous wet, i can repay you. in this excerpt from "song of myself," which literary device does whitman use to address the sea? alliteration allusion apostrophe onomatopoeia

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