Does this sound right for a thesis statement? "martin luther king, jr. used stylistic elements such as the use of simile, imagery, metaphor, and other rhetorical devices, these stylistic elements king to influence the person reading the letter, these elements persuade those reading this letter to see where martin luther king jr. is coming from factually and emotionally."

Sorry but it doesn't sound like a thesis statement.

Explanation:

The reason why is because it's a bit of topic from the main point it's getting to and seems long when it could be summarized and still give the same message.

the right ones are in bold.

daintly refers to the fact she was reaching for what she ate, not necessarily what she is like.

greatest charm as in she possessed (=had) the greatest charm.

pleasant (her demeanor)

speaking (of her sensibility)

dead refers to the hypothetical mouse.

bleeding refers to the hypothetical mouse.