Which is an example of a thesis that should be revised for clarity?
a. many different groups have a lot of opinions about gun rights.
b. there should be more cooperation between federal and state law
enforcement on the issue of gun control.
c. the second amendment states that americans have the right to
bear arms.
d. owning a firearm is immoral.

b. there should be more cooperation between federal and state law

enforcement on the issue of gun control.

explanation:

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the use of “as” in the example to draw the resemblance. some more examples of common similes are given below. common examples of simile. our soldiers are as brave as lions. her cheeks are red like a rose. he is as funny as a monkey. the water well was as dry as a bone. he is as cunning as a fox. simile introduces vividness into what we say.

i think that it is letter d.