Language development: conventions and style
identity the choice that best answers the question
read this sentence and think about how it could be expressed more clearly
at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front; he took notes on the discussions, between meetings, he transcribed the
notes
which of the following revisions incorporates parallelism most effectively?
a at the constitutional convention, james madison sat and took notes down front and between meetings, transcribed the notes.
b. at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front, took notes on the discussions, and transcribed the notes betwee
meetings
c
at the constitutional convention, james madison sat down front, and he took notes on the discussions and transcribed the notes
between meetings
d. at the constitutional convention, james madison sat and took notes on the discussions down front, and he transcribed the notes
between meetings.