Which detail is most important to include in a summary of
the excerpt?
read the following excerpt from "woman who hide
anne frank dies at 100" by teri schultz.
schultz: but gies clearly was very special, even when
someone still unknown betrayed those she called the
hiders and they were taken away at gunpoint to death
camps. gies was not intimidated. she sneaked back into
the secret hideaway to try to preserve any belongings of
the franks that hadn't been destroyed or taken. and there
she found what would eventually become a treasure of the
entire world
someone unknown betrayed the hiders, and they were
taken away at gunpoint.
gies was very special and not intimidated even after the
franks were taken.
gies sneaked back into the hideaway to preserve the
franks' belongings.
miep found anne's diary, which would eventually
become a treasure.

a personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. to maximize its impact, the essay should: be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and hope i

in my opinion, anyone should be allowed to marry as long as it's not going against any laws. though i kind of contradict myself because i know that in some states and countries, gay marriage isn't legal yet- hopefully you get my point.

i think ethier way not sure

you have so far written an informative essay (if you haven't then you might want to do that. look back at the lesson for guidance) answer the question but is it the best conclusion it can be? does it properly summarize the main subtopics of your essay? does it state in one or two sentences the “so what” of your topic. if your topic was abraham lincoln, your essay shouldn’t be just about abraham lincoln. it should answer, “so what about abraham lincoln? ”

revise your conclusion

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