Read this excerpt from "one minute longer" by albert payson terhune.

"heroism—consists—in—hanging—on—one —minute—longer,” the boy was whispering deliriously to himself for the hundredth time; as wolf pattered up to him in triumph, across the ice, with the human rescuers a scant ten yards behind.

which plot moment is best represented by the excerpt?

i think the answer is :   the assassination of julius caesar causes the death of numerous roman citizens, the formation of new conflicts, and mark antony rises in power, also b

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-lavira : )

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

lemme actually be useful and say i believe the answer is the first one.