Write a paragraph do you believe in ghosts or in the supernatural ? why?

I believe in the supernatural.  All the stories, shows, and evidence, cannot all be fake.  When watching a show such as 'Ghost Adventures', you can tell that some things are set up, but most things are genuine.  You can tell that this is real by their reactions, they show fear, and shock on their face.  There is so much evidence to prove ghosts do exist, such as EVPs, and new technology is being developed to see the structure of ghosts.  In a world where there is so much to be discovered, why are ghosts not in the picture?

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

honestly, is this even a but since you asked, he's probably at the store trying to get you food.