Lauren is writing an article for the local newspaper about adopting a pet from the shelter. she needs to revise her article so it is more heartfelt and convinces readers to adopt a shelter pet. which task would be most appropriate for lauren to do while revising the article? to describe the layout of the shelter in detail so people know what to expect to include personal experiences of people who have adopted from the shelter to replace weak words and phrases with more concrete ones to add clear and logical transitions between ideas

european parent languages

expresses state of being

a) why did you buy only one bunch of bananas ? it's not enough for the party .

b) can i have a carton of juice, ? it looks very fresh !

c) a kilo of milk ? that's 2 pounds, .

d) i've got only one bar of chocolate . you can have a half of it .

e) cut just a small slice of cheese for me . i'm trying to lose weight .

f) do you want a bowl of soup ? it's delicious !

g) can i have a tin of biscuits, ?

h) do you want a loaf of bread ? i bought three .

i) let's buy a glass of wine to celebrate our wedding anniversary !

j) don't leave the jar of honey on the table . the kids will break it .

k) we need to buy some sweets and a bottle of coke .

l) would you like a cup of hot tea ? you've got a cold !

m) can i have a piece of chocolate cake, ? it's my favourite dessert .

n) i bought a beautiful packet of flowers for my mum's birthday .

hope this !