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read the paragraph from nick's personal narrative.
which element of a personal narrative would be best for
nick to include next?
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standing alone in my family's barn, i thought about how
much hard work and time my parents had invested—how
much hard work and time we had all invested-in
maintaining a fully operational farm. i did not remember a
time when my clothes had not reeked of manure or my hair
had not held fast to brittle pieces of straw. what would
happen if my parents had to sell the farm so we could
move closer to my grandparents? just as i was attempting
to imagine a life in the city; a sudden commotion erupted
and interrupted my thoughts. with animals squawking and
wking and
dust flying, i scrambled to pinpoint the source of this
unexpected intrusion. in seconds that felt more like
minutes, i was and i could scarcely believe
what my eyes were seeing.
a precise description of what the writer is witnessing
when he says that he could scarcely believe what [his]
eyes were seeing
a line of dialogue in which the narrative's subject shouts,
"oh my! i can't believe what my eyes are seeing! "
a reflection that includes specific examples of how the
experience has changed the writer and an analysis of
what made it memorable
a detailed paragraph that to clearly establish the
point of view from which the narrative is being told

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

i believe its a. the idea that women need protection from men is a myth.

i belive the answer is to determine what manhattan island was like before it became a city - apex