53. in the preceding sentence, the writer is considering
revising the phrase "choked out to the word “harmed”
and the word "overrun" to the word "affected.” should
the writer make these revisions?
a. yes, because the revisions provide clearer reasons
for the initiatives to remove dyer's woad from
montana.
b. yes, because the revisions add a level of technical
detail to an otherwise casual essay.
c. no, because the revisions suggest that the work of
the group lily belongs to has been largely
ineffective.
d. no, because the revisions downplay how destruc-
tive dyer's woad has been in montana.