19:32 Read the sentence below about the Chicago fire of 1871.
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Schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm
box and that caused a miscommunication during the
Chicago fire of 1871.
O Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the
wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication
during the Chicago fire.
O Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm
box and that caused a miscommunication during the
massive Chicago fire of 1871.
O Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm
Box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a
miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
O Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm
Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to
an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
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sight: watching a movie

touch: petting a dog

smell: smelling dinner

hearing: listening to music

taste: eating pizza

to me i think class room sitting education is better. i do online school and i have not learned a think haha. when i sit in the classroom i just sit there and kind of pay attention but still i get so far ahead in the class when im doing online i have nothing else better to do but play video games and i sit in school and learn and have friends and just actually learn. when i'm doing online i sit here listing to music and get on and and look up the answers i guess that is my fault for being a cheater. but to be honest i think sitting in the classroom is better.

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but it is sometime nessary to hit key points or subjects   but is sometimes to much reveiw if there was a way to slim down the redone work it would improve for every body.