Hi. I have to revise my conclusion, but I don't know what to. Could you please help me? :) Here it is:
In brief, video games are not harmful to adolescents because it expands interests to participate, and it expresses the player’s emotions. Many others may disagree with this and will continue to stand by their point, but video games can teach kids to make good decisions, and to give people opportunities, or to give them a push to doing what they enjoy. Video games are great for every kid, even if they are the ones just watching.

Honestly, your conclusion looks great to me! If you want to make a couple changes, I would say to just use bigger/more meaningful words.

Explanation:

For example, you say, "but video games can teach kids to make good decisions". Instead of using the word good, choose a different word such as virtuous. Hope this helps!!

according to the options stated, the one that is correct is the second option. the author most likely includes the panel to hint at the strong bonds among his family members. besides, the image from art spiegelman’s maus is common to show and portray the innocence and naivete of the children during the holocaust as well as the fact that millions of innocent jews were rounded up and taken by train to camps.

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