I have all the evidence and info I need for this assignment I just have a really hard time connecting all of my ideas. This is for Ap Lang! I need this as soon as possible, I appreciate any help! Below I have listed the reasons/ evidence I need an argumentative thesis statement made with them! Question: Does pursuing happiness have detrimental effects?
My Stance: Pursuing happiness does have detrimental effects.
Reason 1:
Strain relationships in life.
Evidence 1:
The Jonas Brothers broke up due to their steady pursuit of happiness, being the next biggest band in the world. Consequently, they were no longer brothers but business partners.
Reason 2:
Lose passion
Evidence 2:
The Jonas Brothers eventually broke up because they had lost the spark that inspired them to become performers, they lost themselves trying to conform to what the world expected them to be.
Reason 3:
Put you in places you never thought you´d be in
Evidence 3:
Due to the loss of identity the brothers broke up and ended up not talking to each other for years because they spent so long being in business with each other they forgot how to just be brothers.