If someone could help me fix this to sound better and "make more sense and use better grammar" like my teacher asked me to do, it would be so so so helpful ^v^ thx! But gazing at this love-less boy the girl made a decision…she would give this boy her love. So she did. But you see, This girl, she gave that boy her whole entire heart. Not because she felt pity for him or because She would take it back later on or even to make her look great to society, but, because she was very much aware that he required it, more than she ever would.

Read the excerpt from “take the tortillas out of your poetry.” i do not believe we should have to leave out the crucial elements of our language and culture to contribute to american literature, but, unfortunately, this is a conclusion i am forced to reach. i have been writing for a quarter century, and have been a published author for eighteen years. as a writer, i was part of the chicano movement which created a new literature in this country. which type of rhetoric is used most in the excerpt to convince readers that anaya’s conclusion is accurate? an appeal based on emotion an appeal based on logic an appeal based on the author’s character an appeal based on the author’s feelings