Please help A student is writing a research paper and wants to revise the draft. Read the paragraph from the student's paper and select the sentence that does NOT maintain the objective tone of the paper.

There are many cultural concepts that exist in other countries that do not exist in the United States. Perhaps the most foreign to American culture is the Japanese concept of "wabi-sabi." or embracing the imperfect or impermanent, rather than trying to correct or hold onto it. The theory is that abandoning the quest for perfection brings one greater
peace. American culture is as far from this concept as can be