What is wrong with each of the following thesis statements. Then revise each thesis to make it more effective. 1.In this paper, I will discuss the causes of asthma. which include exposure to smoke, chemicals, and allergic reactions. 2. Jogging is an enjoyable aerobic sport 3. The crime rate is increasing in U. S cities. 4. Living in an apartment has many advantages 5. Children's toys can be dangerous, instructional Or creative

Which of the following quotations reveal an omniscient point-of-view? a. "then the king got his spear in both his hands and ran toward sir mordred, crying, 'traitor, now has thy death-day come! '" b. "and the king thought that under him, far from him, was hideous deep black water; therein were all manner of serpents and worms and wild beasts, foul and horrible." c. "but when the hosts on both sides saw that sword drawn, they blew trumpets and horns and shouted grimly, and the two hosts rushed toward each other." d."then they agreed that king arthur and sir mordred should meet between their two hosts, and that each of them should bring fourteen persons with him."

How is theme of loneliness developed in chapter 4? thinking about the characters lennie,crooks,candy,and curley's wife

What is the tone of the following passage from a river runs through it by norman maclean? “this was the last fish we were ever to see paul catch. my father and i talked about this moment several times later, and whatever our other feelings, we always felt it fitting that, when we saw him catch his last fish, we never saw the fish but only the artistry of the fisherman.”