Question 3: What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 4 to improve cohesion? *
A. Students who want to take the opportunity to develop their perspectives about life
O will find that they are able to enter college as mature students equipped with a better
grasp of life's expectations.
B. Students who want to take the opportunity to develop their perspectives may do so
O and find that they enter as college students with more mature thinking and also better
with expectations with life.
C. Students who want to take the opportunity to develop their perspectives will find
they are not only able to enter college but also mature students equipped with a better
grasp of life's expeccations.
D. Students who want to take the opportunity to develop their perspectives about life
will find that they are able to enter college, and they are also students who are mature
and able to grasp life's expectations.