Can someone tell me if this poem I made is fine/good: Free verse Poem | The blue sea

The blue sea,
A sea of water filled with different creatures.
While the waves crash in loud motions,
And rise like an arm, reaching to the shore.
The sea shines as bright as the sun in the sky,
While the winds blow and vanish into the air.
Fish darting through the cold water, so high,
The ocean is truly something rare.
It is so very charming,
With many different things to compare.
From the windy, blue skies’ being oh so calming,
To the warm sun shining so radiantly.
The ocean has such beauty,
From the outside of it to the depths of it.