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1. for how long have you been playing roblox?

about 5 years

2. for how long have you been in the star wars genre?

long time

3. what are your experiences of a leadership role?

commanders

4. why are you wanting to become an officer?

to the group, to get activity up, to make people better with combat and honor.

5. what are your strong traits?

leader ship, combat, training people, giveing and receving commands.

6. what are your weak traits?

aiming, thats really.

7. do you have any additional skills that might benefit the republic? such as building/scripting?

no.

8. how would you react to a person breaking the rules?

telling them that they need to follow the rules. and if they don't get back up, i only use admin if i have to.

9. have you read the information document?

yes.

10. generally explain yourself in one paragraph.

i'm nice, fun, touph when i have to be. i don't aa, i if i can, active. i don't give up easy. i fight until we it's over. i try to make stuff fun.

there on the beach was a struggling turtle.   around its bright green neck was a loop of soda can rings.   in order to the planet, i have made a few changes to my life.   the first change is reducing the number of straws used. the second change was to recycle.   finally, i have worked hard to clean up litter.   it is important to clean our ocean.

you may not think straws have a large impact but they do.   imagine for every straw you sip out of a poor, , adorable turtle is being harmed.   one way i chipped in to is by using metal straws.   these straws are reusable and inexpensive.   another change is simply turning down straws.   by refusing a straw, i’m the turtles one drink at a time.  

however, the ocean just doesn't have turtles.   there are lots of creatures that live there and are harmed by all the litter.   to prevent litter from growing it’s important to recycle.   for me, i have started to buy most goods that are made out of recycled material.   pura vidas, chacos, purses, and too many other items to even count.   plus, when you buy those products they give money to charities.   not only am i the environment, but i’m also feeling better about my self.   finally, i have worked hard to clean up litter.   it is important to clean our ocean.

explanation:

a simile is first defined as a type of speech that uses one thing or phrase with comparisons to things of an unrelated kind, often in order to make a more vivacious description. so of the phrases above, only the last one (i swear she cast a shadow white as stone) would be considered a simile, as a shadow white as stone takes two unrelated things and uses them in an interesting way.

explanation:

mark brainliest and have a great day!