Tejas decided to rewrite the sentence

the crowd yelled, and they jumped up when the buzzer went off.
as
when the buzzer sounded, the cheering fans leaped to their feet in excitement.

was tejas correct in making the revision?

a) no, because the new sentence is much too long.
b) yes, because the new sentence adds vivid language.
c) yes, because the new sentence is longer than the first.
d) no, because the new sentence is not as clear as the first.

Healthcare costs are becoming an issue for many americans. in just two years, the average family has seen an increase of 3 percent in insurance costs. the increase rises to 25 percent when you include families who buy insurance on an exchange. at this rate, health care will soon be completely unaffordable for most americans. therefore, lowering the cost of health insurance must be a priority for lawmakers. which statement best explains why the argument is logical? a.)the argument incorporates empirical and anecdotal evidence. b.)the argument includes a strong counterclaim and a fair rebuttal. c.)the argument contains relevant reasons supported with facts and data. d.)the argument includes a personal experience as an emotional appeal.