I need some advice and/or opinions on my thesis statement of the essay i am doing for the book The Chrysalids. I'm following the event+response=outcome

the essay is about how do individuals respond to fear of change btw

thesis: In the novel, "The Chrysalids", by John Wyndham, the author develops the idea that when individuals fear change it causes conflicts and lack of acceptance, which results in living in constant violence and concern of their lives, leading to the isolation and struggles that they ultimately face.​

Read the excerpt from "the blackfeet creation." how do readers know that this excerpt is from a myth? the excerpt describes an animal called a muskrat. the excerpt describes old man drying the mud. the excerpt describes old man scattering mud over water. the excerpt describes how muskrat create land.

Can someone me with this english question

Read the excerpt from the land. of my brothers, i was closest with robert. i suppose, in part, being the same year's children made us close, but there were other things too. we had been together practically since birth, and we always took care of each other. when i got into trouble, robert was there to pull me out of it if he could, or at least to see me through it, and i did the same for him. the passage provides evidence of why paul and robert have physical conflicts. paul and robert avoid social conflicts. paul is the least influenced by robert. paul is motivated to ask robert for .