What is the main problem with this introduction paragraph? Games Games Games claims to have the best trade-in deals in town.
But just last week, I brought a $35 video game to your trade-in store.
Even though it was in great condition, I was given only $4 for it. Later, I
saw that you were selling used copies of the same game for $22. Is
this really fair to your customers?
PLEASE HELPPP

hello mate, can you add the lines 206-247?

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?

i do not the question is put in the corrorect order

what are you talking about