As Sam laid there in the burning building, listening to his friends call out his name. He simply ignored there calls and put more pressure on his bleeding side. It was jack fault he got bit and had to kill his best friend in the same day. He stood up still holding his bleeding side and limped toward jack. "Wow I'm impressed." Jack said sarcastically. Jack quickly shoved Sam down to his knees and started rambling, "A little more impressed than I was watching your friend fight of that infected, DAAA. MN YOU SHOULDVE SEEN HIS FACE when I shot out his knee caps to let the infected eat away at his flesh." Jack added. Jack was now standing in front of Sam. "Yeah." Sam added "we'll at least I'll be alive to see my friends again." Sam quickly spin the axe into jacks leg, making him fall down. Sam pulled his pistol out of his holster and pointed it at jacks forehead. "It's your choice now brother." Jack mumbled Without a second thought Sam pulled the trigger

Some grammar errors, I'd suggest putting it through grammarly for editing mistakes. I liked the idea of it and the way you write is pretty smooth. Introductions especially on a story is a challenge for me. Keep writing. I would really like to see it continued.

Hello There!!

Explanation:

Great story,keep it up.Just some minor grammatical errors but overall its amazing, good use of imagination.

hope this helps,have a great day!!

~Pinky~

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it