The following thesis statements are for literary analysis papers comparing the characters in the short stories The lesson by Toni Cade Bambara and the stolen party by Liliana hacker. Which is the better thesis statement?

(important to read ender's game before answering) in what ways can people be both intelligent and foolish at the same time? how does the author show ender’s intelligence enabling him to fight against authority? make sure your ideas are well-organized and clear. review your word choice and make sure supports your purpose. edit by correcting errors in spelling and grammar and give your work a final polish.