Which statement best evaluates the effectiveness of this conclusion paragraph?
Thesis: By mixing their friendship, a little help from the French, and a
World's Fair, Morrison and Wharton created the recipe that would give
rise to cotton candy.
Main Points:
1. The unusual friendship between Morrison and Wharton
2. The cotton candy recipe
3. Successful debut at World's Fair
Conclusion: In conclusion, Morrison and Wharton's friendship helped
them invent a sweet, French-inspired treat that made history at the
1904 World's Fair. Their invention proves that some of the best
combinations come from the most unlikely friendships.
0 A. The conclusion is ineffective because it brings in new information
not addressed in the main points.
O B. The conclusion is ineffective because it leaves out a satisfying
closing statement.
O C. The conclusion is ineffective because it fails to restate the thesis
statement in a new way.
D. The conclusion is ineffective because it does not summarize the
main points of the essay.