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i was recently made aware of your available bank teller position. i am currently working towards a bachelor of science in business management at san francisco state university and look forward to starting my career at chase bank. my qualifications are further detailed on the attached resume.
during the past five years, i have acquired substantial experience in various customer service oriented positions. i have a firm grasp of banking procedures, in-depth awareness of current financial issues, a solid understanding of banking terminology and a strong proficiency in ms office and related applications.
i am seeking an entry-level position as a bank teller with the goal of acquiring valuable experience and opening doors to exciting new opportunities at chase bank. additionally, i have extensive internal and external communications abilities, a positive attitude and excellent problem solving skills that would make me an asset to your staff.
i look forward to enhancing your already solid reputation for customer service through diligent work and an innate ability to quickly learn and apply new concepts and procedures. i am available for an interview at your convenience. you for your time and consideration.

I have recently been notified of the available Bank Teller position you have open. Currently I attend San Francisco State University and am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Business Management. I am looking forward to starting a career at Chase Bank. In the attached resume you will find more details on my qualifications. 

In the past five years, I have obtained a very substantial amount of experience in various customer service oriented positions. I have a firm grasp of banking procedures, in-depth awareness of current financial issues, a solid understanding of banking terminology, and a high level of proficiency in MS Office and related applications.  

I am seeking this job as a Bank Teller so that I may gain more experience and open doors to new opportunities that will help Chase Bank grow and prosper. I have many great values that could help your business have a great satisfaction rate. I have extensive internal and external communication abilities. I also have a positive attitude and excellent problem solving skills. These skills can make into a very good asset to your staff members. 

I am looking forward to enhancing your solid reputation for customer service by working diligently and an innate ability to quickly learn and apply many new concepts and procedures throughout your business. I am available at any time to be interviewed at your convenience. Thank your for your time and consideration!