Below are four complete introductions from classroom speeches. each has at least one flaw that keeps it from fulfilling all the functions of a good introduction. in each case (using the form fields below) identify the flaw (or flaws) and make specific suggestions for improving the introduction. every problem has at least two sides. when one side is right, and the other side is wrong, the problem is easy to solve. but what if both sides have merit in their arguments? how do you solve these problems? balancing the rights of everyone in an adoption is one of these problems. the parents who give up the child have a right that all the information they disclose be kept confidential, while the adopted child has a right to know about the identity of his or her natural parents. today, i’d like to explore this problem with you and look at one approach to solving it.

our democratic-republican government is based on the idea of the natural right of every individual member thereof to . . a vote in making and executing the laws.

explanation:

love, how my life is right now. you can be loved and can love others. sometimes you dont feel loved right now, dont worry, someone out there is loving you while you are away.

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the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.